Ghazal 465 of Hafez (7 couplets), in the original Persian as on Ganjoor, with a transliteration, a plain English translation, the meanings of key words and the traditional fâl-e Hâfez reading.
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COUPLET 1
رفتم به باغ صبحدمی تا چنم گلیآمد به گوش ناگهم آواز بلبلی
raftam be bâgh sobhdami tâ chenam goli / âmad be gush nâgaham âvâz-e bolboli
One dawn I went into the garden to pick a rose, and suddenly a nightingale's song reached my ear.
COUPLET 2
مسکین چو من به عشق گلی گشته مبتلاو اندر چمن فکنده ز فریاد غلغلی
meskin cho man be eshgh-e goli gashte mobtalâ / v-andar chaman fekande ze faryâd ghalghali
Poor thing, like me it had fallen into love with a rose, and its cries had filled the meadow with clamor.
COUPLET 3
می‌گشتم اندر آن چمن و باغ دم به دممی‌کردم اندر آن گل و بلبل تاملی
migashtam andar ân chaman o bâgh dam be dam / mikardam andar ân gol o bolbol ta'ammoli
I kept walking through that meadow and garden, moment by moment reflecting on that rose and that nightingale.
COUPLET 4
گل یار حسن گشته و بلبل قرین عشقآن را تفضلی نه و این را تبدلی
gol yâr-e hosn gashte o bolbol gharin-e eshgh / ân râ tafazzoli na o in râ tabaddoli
The rose had become beauty's companion, the nightingale love's partner: the one shows no kindness, the other never changes.
COUPLET 5
چون کرد در دلم اثر آواز عندلیبگشتم چنان که هیچ نماندم تحملی
chon kard dar delam asar âvâz-e andalib / gashtam chenân ke hich namândam tahammoli
When the nightingale's song took hold of my heart, I was so moved that I had no patience left.
COUPLET 6
بس گل شکفته می‌شود این باغ را ولیکس بی بلای خار نچیده‌ست از او گلی
bas gol shekofte mishavad in bâgh râ vali / kas bi balâ-ye khâr nachide-st az u goli
Many roses bloom in this garden, but no one has ever picked a rose from it without the pain of thorns.
COUPLET 7
حافظ مدار امید فرج از مدار چرخدارد هزار عیب و ندارد تفضلی
Hâfez madâr omid-e faraj az madâr-e charkh / dârad hezâr eyb o nadârad tafazzoli
Hafez, do not hope for relief from the turning of the sky: it has a thousand faults and no kindness at all.
What this fâl tells you
A morning walk in the garden can open the heart: tradition reads this fal as a sign that your love is faithful even when the other side seems slow to answer. Every rose comes with thorns, so accept a little difficulty for something beautiful. Do not wait on fate alone; your own steadiness will carry you.
A traditional-style reading for reflection and enjoyment.
How this ghazal is built
radif: none. qâfiye: -oli (goli, bolboli, ghalghali, ta'ammoli, tabaddoli, tahammoli, tafazzoli). Beyt 7 puns on madâr "do not have" and madâr "orbit".
Key words
| Word | Say it | Meaning (modern Persian) |
|---|---|---|
| raftam | I went dictionary | |
| be | to; for; with; in, by dictionary | |
| bâgh | garden dictionary | |
| tâ | to, until; so that dictionary | |
| چنم | chenam | I may pick (بچینم) dictionary |
| goli | a rose, a flower dictionary | |
| âmad | came dictionary | |
| گوش | gush | ear; gush kon = listen dictionary |
| âvâz | voice, song dictionary | |
| bolboli | a nightingale dictionary | |
| مسکین | meskin | poor, wretched dictionary |
| چو | cho | since, when; like (= chon) (چون) |
| من | man | I, me dictionary |
| گشته | gashte | having become dictionary |
| مبتلا | mobtalâ | afflicted dictionary |
| و | va / o | and dictionary |
| andar | in (= dar) (در) | |
| چمن | chaman | meadow, lawn dictionary |
| فکنده | fekande | having cast (ghalghali fekande = having raised a clamor) (افکنده) dictionary |
| ze | from, of (= az) (از) | |
| فریاد | faryâd | cry, shout dictionary |
| می‌گشتم | migashtam | I was walking about dictionary |
| ân | that dictionary | |
| dam | moment; breath dictionary | |
| می‌کردم | mikardam | I was doing; rahâ mikardam = I let go dictionary |
| گل | gol | rose; flower dictionary |
| bolbol | nightingale dictionary | |
| یار | yâr | beloved; friend dictionary |
| hosn | beauty dictionary | |
| قرین | gharin | joined to, companion of dictionary |
| نه | na | not, no dictionary |
| in | this dictionary | |
| چون | chon | since, when; like dictionary |
| کرد | kard | do (with tavân: can do) dictionary |
| dar | in; door dictionary | |
| delam | my heart dictionary | |
| asar | effect, mark dictionary | |
| andalib | nightingale (بلبل) | |
| گشتم | gashtam | I became dictionary |
| چنان | chenân | so, in such a way dictionary |
| هیچ | hich | any; no dictionary |
| نماندم | namândam | did not remain to me (hich namândam tahammoli = I had no patience left) dictionary |
| tahammoli | patience, endurance dictionary | |
| bas | much, many dictionary | |
| shekofte | bloomed dictionary | |
| می‌شود | mishavad | becomes dictionary |
| vali | but dictionary | |
| کس | kas | anyone; with negative: no one dictionary |
| bi | without dictionary | |
| balâ | calamity, torment dictionary | |
| khâr | thorn dictionary | |
| نچیده‌ست | nachide-st | has not picked (= nachide ast) dictionary |
| u | him / her (Persian does not mark gender) dictionary | |
| Hâfez | Hafez, the poet's pen name (takhallos); literally "one who knows the Quran by heart" dictionary | |
| مدار | madâr | do not have! (old imperative); also "orbit, turning" (pun: madâr omid az madâr-e charkh) dictionary |
| omid | hope dictionary | |
| چرخ | charkh | wheel; the sky as a turning wheel dictionary |
| dârad | has; (with arze) shows dictionary | |
| هزار | hezâr | thousand; also "nightingale" (hezâr-dastân) dictionary |
| eyb | fault, flaw dictionary | |
| ندارد | nadârad | does not have dictionary |
Persian text: Ganjoor (ganjoor.net), Hafez, ghazal 465. Transliteration, translation, glosses and reading: Learn Persian Online.
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