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Hafez Ghazal 404: ⁧می‌فکن بر صف رندان نظری بهتر از این⁩

Hafez poetry book, pomegranate and candle in a Persian garden at night.

Ghazal 404 of Hafez (7 couplets), in the original Persian as on Ganjoor, with a transliteration, a plain English translation, the meanings of key words and the traditional fâl-e Hâfez reading.

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COUPLET 1
می‌فکن بر صف رندان نظری بهتر از اینبر در میکده می‌کن گذری بهتر از این
mifekan bar saf-e rendân nazari behtar az in / bar dar-e meykade mikon gozari behtar az in
Cast a kinder glance than this on the ranks of the free spirits; pass by the tavern door more often than this.
COUPLET 2
در حق من لبت این لطف که می‌فرمایدسخت خوب است ولیکن قَدَری بهتر از این
dar hagh-e man labat in lotf ke mifarmâyad / sakht khub ast valikan ghadari behtar az in
The kindness your lip shows me is very good, but a little better than this would be better still.
COUPLET 3
آن که فکرش گره از کار جهان بگْشایدگو در این کار بفرما، نظری بهتر از این؟
ân ke fekrash gereh az kâr-e jahân bogshâyad / gu dar in kâr befarmâ nazari behtar az in
Tell the one whose thinking unties the knots of the world's affairs to give this matter a better look than this.
COUPLET 4
ناصحم گفت که جز غم چه هنر دارد عشقبرو ای خواجهٔ عاقل هنری بهتر از این؟!
nâsehem goft ke joz gham che honar dârad eshgh / borow ey khâje-ye âghel honari behtar az in
My adviser said, "What does love have to offer but grief?" Go away, wise sir: what virtue is better than this?
COUPLET 5
دل بدان رود گرامی چه کنم گر ندهم؟مادر دهر ندارد پسری بهتر از این
del be dân rud-e gerâmi che konam gar nadeham / mâdar-e dahr nadârad pesari behtar az in
What else can I do but give my heart to that precious child? Mother Time has no son better than this.
COUPLET 6
من چو گویم که قَدَح نوش و لب ساقی بوسبشنو از من که نگوید دگری بهتر از این
man cho guyam ke ghadah nush o lab-e sâghi bus / beshno az man ke naguyad degari behtar az in
When I tell you, "Drink the cup and kiss the cupbearer's lip," listen to me: no one will tell you anything better than this.
COUPLET 7
کِلْکِ حافظ شکرین میوه نباتی‌ست، بچینکه در این باغ نبینی ثمری بهتر از این
kelk-e Hâfez shekarin mive nabâti-st bechin / ke dar in bâgh nabini samari behtar az in
Hafez's pen is a sweet plant with sugary fruit: pick from it, for in this garden you will find no fruit better than this.

What this fâl tells you

Things are good, but they can be better, and it is fine to ask for a little more kindness and attention. Tradition reads this fal as encouragement to request gently what you hope for and to bring your question to someone wise who can untie the knot. What you have been offered is sweet; enjoy it.

A traditional-style reading for reflection and enjoyment.

How this ghazal is built

radif: behtar az in ("better than this"). qâfiye: -ari (nazari, gozari, ghadari, honari, pesari, degari, samari).

Key words

WordSay itMeaning (modern Persian)
می‌فکنmifekancast! (keep casting) (بیفکن) dictionary
baron, upon dictionary
safrow, rank dictionary
rendânfree spirits, rogues who scorn hypocrisy dictionary
nazaria look; an eye dictionary
behtarbetter dictionary
inthis dictionary
darin; door dictionary
میکدهmeykadetavern dictionary
می‌کنmikonkeep doing! (gozar mikon = pass by often) (بکن) dictionary
gozaria passing by dictionary
haghright, claim dictionary
منmanI, me dictionary
لبتlabatyour lips dictionary
لطفlotfkindness, grace; be lotf = kindly, gently dictionary
می‌فرمایدmifarmâyadgrants, bestows (polite "does") dictionary
sakhtvery; hard dictionary
khubgood dictionary
astis dictionary
ولیکنvalikanbut (ولی)
ghadaria little, somewhat dictionary
ânthat dictionary
فکرشfekrashhis thought dictionary
کارkârwork; affair, matter dictionary
jahânworld dictionary
bogshâyadmay open, untie (باز کند) dictionary
گوgusay! tell! (= begu) (بگو) dictionary
befarmâplease tell; command dictionary
ناصحمnâsehemmy adviser dictionary
گفتgoftsay (with natavân: cannot say); said dictionary
jozexcept, besides dictionary
ghamsorrow, grief dictionary
چهchewhat; how much! dictionary
هنرhonarskill, art dictionary
dâradhas; (with arze) shows dictionary
borowgo! dictionary
eyO (vocative) dictionary
khâjemaster, lord dictionary
âghelwise, rational dictionary
honaria skill, a virtue dictionary
delheart dictionary
bedânto that (point) (= be ân) (به آن)
ruddear child, son (archaic) (فرزند) dictionary
gerâmidear, precious dictionary
کنمkonamI make, I do dictionary
گرgarif (= agar) (اگر) dictionary
ندهمnadahamI would not give dictionary
مادرmâdarmother dictionary
dahrtime, the world, fate dictionary
نداردnadâraddoes not have dictionary
pesaria son dictionary
چوchosince, when; like (= chon) (چون)
گویمguyamI say dictionary
قدحghadahcup, goblet dictionary
نوشnushdrink! (= benush) (بنوش) dictionary
وva / oand dictionary
لبlablip dictionary
sâghicupbearer dictionary
buskiss (بوسه) dictionary
beshnolisten! dictionary
نگویدnaguyaddoes not say, will not say dictionary
digarianother person (= digari) (دیگری)
کلکkelkreed pen (قلم)
HâfezHafez, the poet's pen name (takhallos); literally "one who knows the Quran by heart" dictionary
میوهmivefruit dictionary
نباتی‌ستnabâti-stis a plant (nabât = plant; also rock candy, a pun) (گیاهی است) dictionary
bechinpick! dictionary
bâghgarden dictionary
nabiniyou will not see dictionary
samaria fruit dictionary

Persian text: Ganjoor (ganjoor.net), Hafez, ghazal 404. Transliteration, translation, glosses and reading: Learn Persian Online.

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